Tennis, Turkish, Delight, Melon, Brook, Officers, Steps, Conclusion, Earliest, Pan, Asparagus, Yellow.
The Letter with No Date
It spoke of asparagus.
What was that all about?
And melons, eaten in the sun?
The vague mention of feathers,
Ruffled during a tennis game.
The crossed-out word: Turkish.
Delight? Coffee? Baths?
Seems out of context.
Handwritten. It had no date.
A woman’s writing, neat.
The paper brittle and yellow.
The ink faded and barely legible.
It had been carefully folded
And put at the back of the book.
That book. The one with the ribbon.
The sort given to officers
Receiving their commission.
It spoke of love, of separation,
It spoke of flowers and candles,
Of brooks and ferny glens.
It spoke of Pan and his flute.
It spoke of desire to reunite.
It spoke of the steps to take,
Places to go, even when to go—
The earliest opportunity, it said.
It sought a conclusion.
I wonder…
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I hope...
ReplyDeleteThis is lovely. Thank you.
The psyche during separation expressed on paper that could be the prelude to a beautiful mystery. :)
ReplyDeleteGood use of the words....very creative. You inspired me to write one too,
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This was wonderful, and intriguing!
ReplyDeleteI'm thinking you might actually have run across a letter like this. If we happen to do that our mind will take off with plenty of ammunition to write.
ReplyDeleteGood job!!
How beautifully imagined! Now I am wondering too.
ReplyDeleteI wonder too... Good use of the prompts.
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I love the ending - and the power of written words - Jae
ReplyDeleteBut no mention of the elephant in the room!
ReplyDeleteClever use of some very disparate prompts.
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You took these words and ever so cleverly created a great story/mystery/poem.
ReplyDeleteHi J - this was delightful to read - thank you ... such an interesting take on the prompts for our Words for Wednesday ... well done - cheers Hilary
ReplyDeleteWonderful! I sometimes find old letters and photos tucked in used books. So special. I wouldn't know you were trying to fit in prompt words at all!
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